Wednesday, 29 January 2014

17. [PREVIEW] Tell-Tale Signs - Part Two

*I know it's been a while & judging by the tweets I've seen, a few of you have stopped reading. This is just an EXTREMELY SHORT PREVIEW just to see if anyone is still reading lol if I get any responses I'll finish the chapter and post asap. & I have no amount of words that could describe how much I hate this fic either but here goes :/*

"I can't believe this is happening." Her words were spoken through a shaky voice, the tears verging on falling. Safaree hadn't spoken a word since Carol had arrived, he was too afraid. Not of her confronting him but of the possibility that she might believe Safaree did this to her daughter. That he led her astray and encouraged her to do something stupid. Of course he would never, but it did appear suspicious.

Things had only worsened after the first hour in the hospital, Nicki's symptoms began to spiral as the effects of the ecstasy hit her body. First starting small with the teeth grinding and jaw clenching before getting to the point of her being held down by nurses as she convulsed violently. SB couldn't shake the vivid images from his mind. It was after the convulsions finished when her body temperature peaked and the doctor figured out what she'd taken, or been given as SB tried to assure them. The rapid body movements of her fits had aided the drug in increasing her body temperature and she was now at risk of hyperthermia. Currently wrapped in a cooling blanket they waited anxiously by her bedside to see if it worked, their fingers crossed with hope. Both of their eyes were fixed on her tiny frame beneath the blanket, for a few moments it was perfectly silent except for the bleeping of monitors.

"I can't believe I was stupid enough to leave her alone." Finally speaking, Safaree rested his head in his hands helplessly. To his surprise, he felt Carol's hand gently rest on his shoulder.

"You can't blame yourself, we're all as guilty as one another if that's how you think about it." She sniffled lightly. "I shouldn't have let her go out, you shouldn't have left her, she shouldn't have let you leave her. It's all the same thing. It's nobody's fault but these girls you believe did this to her." Her face and voice hardened towards the end of her sentence.

"They're not gettin' away with this. They're supposed to be her friends." Still resting his head in his hands he began to bounce his leg angrily. The longer he was sat staring at Nicki being as vulnerable as she was right now, the more his anger grew.

"I know you're angry, Safaree. I am too, believe me. But now is not the time for anger, we need to be here by Onika's side."

He heard her words but they weren't going in. They'd been sat here for hours now and not one person had called to see how she was. He'd confronted Drake before they even got to the hospital, surely he must have said something to Mia and the girls. Even on top of his worry, anger and guilt he was still replaying her voice in his head over and over and over again. He felt like a heartless dick thinking of it right now with everything that was going on but he couldn't help it. Why would she call him that? Aubrey.

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*Like I said, this is miniature but I would rather post a snippet & find out if people will still read than post a full chapter & have nobody read :/*

16 comments:

  1. I need Mia and her flock of bitches to just fall off the face of the earth for doing that to Nic. And poor Safaree & Mama Carol, they're worried sick. Post soon!!

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  2. I'm still here and down to kick anybody ass!!

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  3. Wow! Like what kind of human being would do some crazy shit like that. They could've killed Nicki. And tbh, I check your stories everyday to see when you'll post, I was surprised when I saw Jan 29, 2014. Sooooo happy you're back!!!

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  4. Yay I've been waiting for this..... Mia and her friends are wrong for this and Idgi did she call safaree aubrey

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  5. Post on Frozen

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  6. Yay so happy u posted a lil something, can't wait for the rest.
    Anyways I want nicki to get better, get out the hospital and beat the shit outta Mia and put her ass in the hospital!! Oh and I hope her and sb be ok :/
    Post soon

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  7. Y you hate this story nuuuu it's my fave... Please finish it

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  8. I'M STILL HERE!!!! GIRL U BETTER CONTINUE THIS STORY AND THE OTHERS! I fucking love these stories like u have no idea!

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  9. I'm still here. I need u to finish these stories. You're such a great writer!

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  10. Omg post soon!! I love this story!

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  11. Carlee, must I beg for you to finish this? I'm all on edge. Ugh. Like I said, all of us writers hate our own material. It's great babe. We're waiting for that update! :)

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  12. I'M STILL HERE! BEEN HERE! Camping on this god damn page for years lmaooo. I almost died when I seen the new chap, I thought I was hallucinating. BUT ANYWAY! YAS GWORL, you're back! CONTINUE!!!! Please! And give Mia her comeuppance!! Can't wait xoxo - claire (@clairebynoe)

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  13. This is my favorite out of all your fics. Please keep it going and update soon.

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  14. SMFH. Even after all they still didn't come to confess or even see if she's ok. smh. a mess. anyway, Safaree needs to not be caught up on that "Aubrey" thing cuz just no. Ima need for Nicki to tell him about his stupid ass friends ASAP.

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  15. This is one of my top fics, why do you hate it ? I love this story omgg. Please finish it !!

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  16. Can you please finish this story????

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